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DALMACIJA:
Republic of Serbian Krajina – Government in Exile

The publication of the article about the crimes against the Serbian Orthodox priest - in 1941.

The Government of the Republic of Serbian Krajina in Exile is honored to welcome Diplomatic-Consular Departments in the Republic of Serbia and to inform them about the horrible tortures and murders against Serbian Orthodox priests. These crimes, which took place in 1941 and during the whole WW2, were committed by the Croatian Ustashi authorities on the territories of today’s Croatia and Bosnia and Hercegovina.

The government of Republic of Serbian Krajina in exile is repeating that these crimes are one of the results of the actions planed by the European colonization powers.
The famous German philosopher named Karlhajnc Desner exposed these crimes in of his books, titled as ”The Politic of the Roman Popes during the 20 Century”. Nations surrounding Serbia (Croatians, Albanians, Serbian Catholics, Serbian Muslims and others) were prepared by these European colonization powers to participate in the extermination of the Serbian Orthodox communities at the Balkans.
The Croatian army was ordered by Croatia’s government to fulfill the biological extermination of the Orthodox Serbs on the areas which are controlled by the Croatian Ustashi government. These actions were partly accomplished during WW2.

The following report of the Italian military delegation in Belgrade describes the atrocities, murdering and torturing against a great number of Serbian Orthodox priests. 
The report is additionally confirmed and signed by Luidji Bonfat and by Domeniko Dal Faso.

Protocol’s number: 465
Document number: 003

Belgrade, 27 august of 1941

Subject: Atrocities of Croatian militaries against the Serbian population in Croatia.

This report is signed and acknowledged by the authorities of the Serbian orthodox church. This article is based on information coming from the places of the happenings.

Voja Vojnovic a Serbian Orthodox priest from Osijek is killed.
In the river Drava are two bodies of two Serbian Orthodox priests found.

Prota Zivko Danilovic the former government’s representative from the town Prijedor is killed. Prota Bogdan Banjevic is killed in 19 July near the city of Banja Luka. Number 07 Prota Steva Djuricis is killed in the place of Ogulin. Before the murder the Croatian soldiers were cutting the chin and the eyes and were breaking the arms and legs of the man. The Serbian Orthodox priest form the village Plaski is killed. The Serbian Orthodox priest Milan Trsic from the place Vrlika was captured (on 10 July) and killed in a Croatian military casern near Knin. The Serbian Orthodox Priest Mihajlo Minic from Valjevo is killed in Zenica. The Serbian Orthodox priest Milos Petrovic from Lucana was killed in Derventa during this attempt to escape. The following Serbian Orthodox priests Dusan Bobar, Milos Savic, Janko Savic, Ljubo Jaskic and Drago Makojevic were killed on 22 July in the place Vlasenici. The Serbian Orthodox priests Borivoje Bozic from Palaca near Vukovar is also murdered.  Prota Spiro Starovic from Brcko is killed.
Prota Vida Visnjevac from Gacka who was ill was throwed out of his bed and killed together with Porta Starovic.

The following Porte were also murdered: Gvozdenovic and Vujovis from Mostar.
Kaludjer Deretic and Monastirlic from Ljubinja (Hercegovina) were also assassinated.
Serbian Orthodox priest Bogunovic from Donji Lapac is killed together with his wife and two children. Their bodies were throwed in a pit between Donji Lapac and Boridjevca where other Serbs are also throwed.

The government of the Republic of Serbian Krajina in exile is applying to the certain countries and nations who have also faced the consequences of Europe’s colonization powers to provide help for the opening of the question about the genocide against the Serbs – in the UN.

The government of the Republic of Serbian Krajina in exile is taking use of this opportunity to show it’s high respect towards the diplomatic representatives of Republic of Serbia.     

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I want advice of a native English speaker or somebody else who controls the English language on a high level. What is your opinion about this article? Not about the content of it but about the quality of the language.

Thank you.

SerbChicago:
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DALMACIJA:

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Your mad about the content?

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PS:
What do you think about the text? I mean your opinion of the quality of the language? Please.

SerbChicago:
Yes it was good!

Serbian Cetnik (šumadinac):
The english was good, but about the article. How can someone do such things to holy men. God have mercy upon them.

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