Dear Sarah, I am an engineer, who is finishing Architecture School. I have my own business where I do Architectural and Mechanical Visualizations. A little advice, when you write papers for school, make sure that you make an outline to make sure that you will cover all the points you want to make, go on and do something else for 15 minites and then come back and read your outline and see if you forgot to put something in, then write a draft based on the outline, read the draft and then do a 'final' copy, then reread it and correct all mistakes. This will help you immensely. On this site we are all squeezing in time to do this, so we are all sloppy. You are still in school, so we expect more from you. I can see you are starting to be a little more honest with us. We may be harsh on you, but we are not monsters. It is too bad about your father, but don't let that bother you, I know you are taking a Photography course, did they teach you Photoshop yet, it is a great program, learn it and you can make extra money fixing up photos and also have a lot of fun. Don't mind me so much, my bark is worse than my bite.