I think they wrote him a pretty good speech but a notable exception is when he took pains to express solidarity with american muslims and to say how much he loves them. Another glaring problem w the speech is that he kept promoting 'clean energy' funding and innovation instead of alternative energy like we really need. He also mentioned high tech countries like south korea and other countries US trades with but of course made sure not to mention partnerships with Israel lest his nuslims get offended.