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Kahanist Singles => Jewish Singles => Topic started by: Every Jew AK47 on August 17, 2014, 09:14:40 PM

Title: Our Love -- A Poem
Post by: Every Jew AK47 on August 17, 2014, 09:14:40 PM
The Jewish Kahanist love section seems a bit desolate and unused, so I thought I just post a few love poems I wrote.. Why not?   

Our Love
By EveryJewA44

I thought of you
In the evening's most desolate hour
I remember your eyes and their brilliant glare
Your voice I remember as sweet as the dove's song
And your lips where as red as the rose of Sharon

Do not depart, oh Sweet Maiden
There is relief for souls that are sorrow laden
For my desire for you is too dear
Let us reminisce in our love
And we shall not despair!

How I dream to hold you near my heart
There is brightness shining in the dark
It is your love for me and my love for you
Everything is a lie
But our passion be true!

Oh My Dear Kahanist Jewess, How I love you!


I did modify the last line a bit for this forum..   :laugh:   Originally, there was a name of a girl who I wrote the poem for, but I will not disclose that here.
Title: Re: Our Love -- A Poem
Post by: Super Mentalita on August 28, 2014, 11:49:53 AM
Hehe nice one! Specially the last line is nice and fun!
Title: Re: Our Love -- A Poem
Post by: Every Jew AK47 on September 03, 2014, 12:23:32 AM
Hehe nice one! Specially the last line is nice and fun!

Thanks Super Mentalita..  ;D