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Offline Hyades

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I need your opinions!
« on: April 27, 2009, 05:20:06 PM »
I created 4 Jewish/Israel wallpapers and I would like to know your opinions which one you like most. I got my old site deleted by the admins. On the new site I haven't got enough ul space to host all 4 versions.


full res: http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5748/wallpaper1z.jpg


http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/6035/wallpaper2j.jpg


http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/8501/wallpaperbonesknochen.jpg


http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/6566/wallpaperstam.jpg   :) :dance:

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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2009, 05:54:04 PM »
My comment is that they are all too dark, and hard to read... Maybe make it lighter and with more legible lettering.
You shall make yourself the Festival of Sukkoth for seven days, when you gather in [the produce] from your threshing floor and your vat.And you shall rejoice in your Festival-you, and your son, and your daughter, and your manservant, and your maidservant, and the Levite, and the stranger, and the orphan, and the widow, who are within your cities
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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2009, 07:21:22 PM »
I think you need to write it in english, I cannot read what it says.....ha ha joking. Other than not knowing what they say I think they are pretty cool. If I could read it maybe the text would be a little small, however if you made it larger I think it may not blend well - proportionally. Overall.........good job!!!

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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2009, 11:12:01 PM »
I like the 3rd one down the best, very nice work!
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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #4 on: April 28, 2009, 02:47:29 AM »
Thank you! So the "bones" font I also thought would be suitable for that topic.
@ muman: I wanted them to be that dark because of the "dark" behind that message....
@ drlmg: It says "Don't sacrifice Ertz Yisrael, the Homestead for the muslim beasts!"

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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #5 on: April 28, 2009, 02:57:39 AM »
I like the 3rd one down the best, very nice work!
   

Hyades,

I agree with Arksis, I like the third one the most.
You did a very nice job, nice work.

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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 06:37:08 AM »
They are awesome. The third one is really nice. Keep up the good work and create more Jewish/Israeli wallpapers.
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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 08:57:33 AM »
I have some grammatical remarks:
להקריב ל- rather than אל
הבית הלאומי, or ביתנו הלאומי because this is a definite name in this use, so altogether:

אל תקריבו את ארץ ישראל, הבית הלאומי, לחיות המוסלמיות!

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Re: I need your opinions!
« Reply #8 on: April 28, 2009, 09:55:33 AM »
I have some grammatical remarks:
להקריב ל- rather than אל
הבית הלאומי, or ביתנו הלאומי because this is a definite name in this use, so altogether:

אל תקריבו את ארץ ישראל, הבית הלאומי, לחיות המוסלמיות!

Thank you! I may corect it then!