I think it's good but the word Torah should replace Chofshi. People don't know what Chofshi means in real Hebrew.
Blacks were freed form slavery and became Chofshi. Blacks were freed and had no purpose to serve G-d. We saw what happened.
Jews were freed from Egypt and became Bnei Chorin. Bnei Horin serve G-d. There is no freer Jew than someone who studies Torah.