"In your heart you know we're right...and in your guts you know they're nuts"
I have to say I don't think this is the most effective marketing slogan.
I know it has been a long standing tradition to close shows and articles with it, but I really don't think it is an effective call to action.
Wasn't that line also used by Goldwater?
I think it may be one of the weakest points of JTF's fundraising efforts.
How about something new and original and rousing...
Maybe we should explore some alternatives...Post yours here if you have any.
I was thinking something like:
"With or without your help, God will establish Israel, but it can one of two ways. The easy way, if we band together and take action now of our own decision...or the hard way, through fear and destruction and possibly the deaths of millions...
Are you going to sit there, in apathy? Or are you going to join us to help avert the disaster and take the glorious road to victory? Make a commitment today. Show your support with a donation. Your money will help the righteous Hilltop communities resist the treacherous surrender of Israel's land. Funds will also be used to build online Yeshivas which are teaching true Torah Judaism and building the ideological foundations and strength it will take to win.
The future of America and Western civilization depends on the outcome of this situation!
Remember...A share in the struggle is a share in the glory...Invest now in a better future, for Israel and Western civilization. You can donate to JTF with any major credit card at our site WWW.JTF.ORG. or you can visit the site for our postal address to send a check. You can also join in the discussion at our forum at JTF.ORG/E
Anyways, that isn't very succinct, but as far as raising money, I think the current closing line is not effective at all. Thoughts? Post your ideas here if you have any.
BTW: I like the current set and I think the production quality is just fine. I even think Chaim dresses ok.
I like the set the way it is because it shows that it is the real deal and not some bloated bureacracy run by establishment Jews.
I personally think if any film experts want to contribute, it might be better to do independant work towards fundraising...like videos that have the specific purpose of raising funds.